7/12/2007
Embedded Report
By: Manisha
I did my report on Hieroglyphic Mystery Codes. This is one of the summer classes at
Rainard School. I have important information about this class for you to read.
· What building are they in? Where are they? They are at Rainard School and are in building A.
· What do I see? I see the teacher explaining to the students about dung. Also students are writing.
· What are they doing? They are writing and painting Hieroglyphics.
· What can I hear? I can hear the teacher and students talking. The kids are asking for help on their projects. They are talking about laughing and glitter.
· What do I feel physically? I feel the cool breeze of the A.C.
· What are they using? What materials are they using? They are using information, books, paint, paint brushes, paper, water, markers, spices, glitter, and cups.
This is my embedded report. I hope you found my information that I recorded was interesting.
Thank you!
You have all the facts here, with a little more time, I am sure you can turn this into a very newsworthy report. One of the hardest thing a journalist must do is make the reader feel like they are actually there by recording all the details they can about what’s going on. You are on the right track!
I would like to know more about this class. It sounds very interesting.