My Embedded Report


Embedded Report

By: Manisha

I did my report on Hieroglyphic Mystery Codes. This is one of the summer classes at

Rainard School. I have important information about this class for you to read.

· What building are they in? Where are they? They are at Rainard School and are in building A.

· What do I see? I see the teacher explaining to the students about dung. Also students are writing.

· What are they doing? They are writing and painting Hieroglyphics.

· What can I hear? I can hear the teacher and students talking. The kids are asking for help on their projects. They are talking about laughing and glitter.

· What do I feel physically? I feel the cool breeze of the A.C.

· What are they using? What materials are they using? They are using information, books, paint, paint brushes, paper, water, markers, spices, glitter, and cups.

This is my embedded report. I hope you found my information that I recorded was interesting.

Thank you!


  1. Angie said:

    You have all the facts here, with a little more time, I am sure you can turn this into a very newsworthy report. One of the hardest thing a journalist must do is make the reader feel like they are actually there by recording all the details they can about what’s going on. You are on the right track!

    July 14, 2007
  2. I would like to know more about this class. It sounds very interesting.

    July 17, 2007

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